This week we are learning about the Wayfinder so we made a descriptive writing on how we think they felt after they ran out of food. So here's my piece of writing...
After we got to an island after one day of sailing, it felt like I hadn't eaten for a week. Once we got off the boat we decided to split up to search for food. After a while everyone apart from me had found a small portion of food. I was so faint of starvation that my stomach roared like a T-Rex fighting for dominance. Finally I had found food But it wasn't much... I had found a Coconut and a fresh patch of bananas. After eating I was so happy that I felt blessed with pure joy.
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