Привет, Me and my buddy created a story. Our Learning Intention this week was to deepen our understanding of descriptive language by creating feelings for our reader, such as empathy. We also looked into the effects of short sentences. Empathetic feeling. So this is what I made...
My eyes are sobbing with tears of emotion and pain in my dog's eyes. I told her multiple times that I won’t let her die yet it happened. She will die never knowing why I didn't protect her. Why didn't I love her as much as I promised. Yet she accepts it. There will never be another dog like her. There is only one of you and only one of them. Death is inevitable. It's something we all have to live with right to the point of rest. Till the last time we cuddle. That's life.
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