I have made a poem for reading about Refugees, hope you like it.
Running away is starting to get to me
Even when there is luck
Fighting for my life is what I'm going through
Undergoing this pain is annoying
Getting place to place still being followed
Eventually it ended
Ending was a happy ending for me
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Wow Darion I really like this poem, I'm not saying that you have to do it but you should maybe write more poems if you can.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Darion I like this poem because its acrostic and different from other acrostic poems but I guess every poem is different
ReplyDeleteDid you enjoy making this?